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Well Here's a new idea for a story. Most of your favorite Naruto girls being grabbed a succubus for some fetish delights.

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This is a pretty good fic. There are issues, of course. Some of the paragraphs feature multiple characters talking, which gets confusing. Also, the descriptions of Hinata's thoughts are too general. I don't really feel like I'm in her head.

Overall, though, it was pretty good.